Comma cleanup

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Thomas Jackson 2014-12-12 11:32:58 -08:00
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The main goal of Salt Virt is to facilitate a very fast and simple cloud. The
cloud that can scale and fully featured. Salt Virt comes with the
ability to set up and manage complex virtual machine networking, powerful
image and disk management, as well as virtual machine migration with and without
image, and disk management, as well as virtual machine migration with and without
shared storage.
This means that Salt Virt can be used to create a cloud from a blade center

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@ -394,10 +394,10 @@ be searched first for the requested file; then, if it is not found on the
master, each configured git remote will be searched.
Branches, Environments and Top Files
Branches, Environments, and Top Files
====================================
When using the gitfs backend, branches and tags will be mapped to environments
When using the gitfs backend, branches, and tags will be mapped to environments
using the branch/tag name as an identifier.
There is one exception to this rule: the ``master`` branch is implicitly mapped

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===========================
Once you've configured the permissions for Halite, you'll need to set up the
Halite settings in the /etc/salt/master file. Halite supports CherryPy, Paste
and Gevent out of the box.
Halite settings in the /etc/salt/master file. Halite supports CherryPy, Paste, and Gevent out of the box.
To configure cherrypy, add the following to the bottom of your /etc/salt/master file:

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@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ from the minion as an execution module, in addition to the master as a runner,
it was abstracted into this multi-use library. This library can also be imported
by 3rd-party programs wishing to take advantage of its extended functionality.
Core functionality of the execution, state and runner modules is derived from
Core functionality of the execution, state, and runner modules is derived from
this library, so common usages between them are described here. Documentation
specific to each module is described below.
@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ If decoding is turned on, and references to JSON or XML cannot be found, then
this module will default to plain text, and return the undecoded data as
``text`` (even if text is set to ``False``; see below).
The ``query()`` function can return the HTTP status code, headers and/or text
The ``query()`` function can return the HTTP status code, headers, and/or text
as required. However, each must individually be turned on.
.. code-block:: python
@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ they are not specified, the minion defaults will be used as necessary.
Because passing complete data structures from the command line can be tricky at
best and dangerous (in terms of execution injection attacks) at worse, the
``data_file`` and ``header_file`` are likely to see more use here.
``data_file``, and ``header_file`` are likely to see more use here.
All methods for the library are available in the execution module, as kwargs.

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@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ already running, stop it. There is only one requirement when preparing a
redundant master, which is that masters share the same private key. When the
first master was created, the master's identifying key pair was generated and
placed in the master's ``pki_dir``. The default location of the master's key
pair is ``/etc/salt/pki/master/``. Take the private key, ``master.pem`` and
pair is ``/etc/salt/pki/master/``. Take the private key, ``master.pem``, and
copy it to the same location on the redundant master. Do the same for the
master's public key, ``master.pub``. Assuming that no minions have yet been
connected to the new redundant master, it is safe to delete any existing key

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@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ and set them up to be mounted, and the ``salt`` object is used multiple
times to call shell commands to gather data.
Introducing the Python, PyDSL and the Pyobjects Renderers
Introducing the Python, PyDSL, and the Pyobjects Renderers
---------------------------------------------------------
Sometimes the chosen default renderer might not have enough logical power to

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@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Verify that Apache is now serving your custom HTML.
.. admonition:: ``require`` vs. ``watch``
There are two :ref:`requisite-declaration`, “require” and “watch”. Not
There are two :ref:`requisite-declaration`, “require”, and “watch”. Not
every state supports “watch”. The :mod:`service state
<salt.states.service>` does support “watch” and will restart a service
based on the watch condition.
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Next steps
==========
In :doc:`part 3 <states_pt3>` we will discuss how to use includes, extends and
In :doc:`part 3 <states_pt3>` we will discuss how to use includes, extends, and
templating to make a more complete State Tree configuration.

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@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ Given the above setup, the OverState will be carried out as follows:
minion IDs start with "web".
3. Finally, the ``all`` stage will execute, running :mod:`state.highstate
<salt.modules.state.highstate>` on all systems, if and only if the ``mysql``
<salt.modules.state.highstate>` on all systems, if, and only if the ``mysql``
and ``webservers`` stages completed without any failures.
Any failure in the above steps would cause the requires to fail, preventing the

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@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ that can solve many specific problems in an infrastructure.
The backbone of Salt is the remote execution engine, which creates a high-speed,
secure and bi-directional communication net for groups of systems. On top of this
communication system, Salt provides an extremely fast, flexible and easy-to-use
communication system, Salt provides an extremely fast, flexible, and easy-to-use
configuration management system called ``Salt States``.
Installing Salt
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salt-key -L
The keys that have been rejected, accepted and pending acceptance are listed.
The keys that have been rejected, accepted, and pending acceptance are listed.
The easiest way to accept the minion key is to accept all pending keys:
.. code-block:: bash
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Salt allows for minions to be targeted based on a wide range of criteria. The
default targeting system uses globular expressions to match minions, hence if
there are minions named ``larry1``, ``larry2``, ``curly1`` and ``curly2``, a
there are minions named ``larry1``, ``larry2``, ``curly1``, and ``curly2``, a
glob of ``larry*`` will match ``larry1`` and ``larry2``, and a glob of ``*1``
will match ``larry1`` and ``curly1``.

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@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ have to do it all over again. It also lets you *uninstall* things easily.
.. note::
Brew is a Ruby program (Ruby is installed by default with your Mac). Brew
downloads, compiles and links software. The linking phase is when compiled
downloads, compiles, and links software. The linking phase is when compiled
software is deployed on your machine. It may conflict with manually
installed software, especially in the /usr/local directory. It's ok,
remove the manually installed version then refresh the link by typing